The Things He Would Say – [Part 3]: Ulterior Motive

A father with a severely autistic son dreams of going to Hajj, but will it ever happen?

Previous Chapters: Part 1 | Part 2

Ulterior Motive

Abu Ali gaped at him in consternation. “What do you mean no? You just said that this is your dream, the thing you yearn for. Take the money, go to Hajj.”

Murid tipped his head back. The sky was darkening, and he could see the Big Dipper clearly. The sea breeze had strengthened, and goosebumps rose on his skin. He would need to pray Maghreb soon.

“No one gives away money,” Murid pointed out. “There are always strings attached. That’s a heavy envelope. More than I would need for Hajj.”

Abu Ali did not reply immediately, and Murid was surprised to see a blush darken the big man’s face.

“Well… You see… I do have an ulterior motive. My daughter Hiba is interested in you. I would even say enamored. After talking to you, I see that you are a man of principle. The fact that you stem from noble lineage does not hurt. So whatever money remains after you complete Hajj, I ask that you use it as a mahr to marry Hiba. This is just between me and you, she does not know.”

Murid could not have been more surprised if Abu Ali had picked him up by his ankles and swung him upside down like a pendulum. He opened his mouth, then closed it. That smart, lovely young woman wanted to marry him? Why?

“She understands about my son, right?”

“Of course. I argued against marrying you for that reason. I’m a pragmatist. As fallen royalty I have to be, it comes with the territory. But she is a romantic, she says that you are special. And I respect her desires.”

Emotions battled in Murid’s chest: amazement that this young woman, who barely knew about him, was apparently in love with him, or at least impressed enough to consider him for marriage. The yearning to meet Allah in the land of the two sacred precincts, and surging hope that this was now within his grasp. But also honor, and pride. When he finally went to Hajj, he wanted it to be the product of his own labor and sweat, as well as Allah’s help. When he married he wanted to pay the mahr himself, as a gift from himself to his future wife, not a “wink wink” runaround.

Furthermore, he could not marry Hiba just because of the surface qualities he had observed. He had to know her better, and introduce her to his kids so he could see how she behaved around them. It didn’t matter that her family was rich, or royalty, or whatever. Whatever choice he made, it had to be good for his kids. That was the bottom line, and was one of the two criteria by which he weighed every decision in life: one, does it please Allah? Two, is it good for my kids?

“Jazak Allah khayr,” he said at last, “but I must make Hajj under my own steam.”

The Deal

Abu Ali pursed his lips. “Do you know the story of the old woman who prayed to Allah to be saved from the flood?”

“No, is it a hadith?”

“Not at all. Just an old joke. But there’s a lesson in it. An old woman was warned that the dam would break and the town would be flooded. A group of firemen came to her with a fire truck and asked her to evacuate with them. She refused and said, ‘Allah will save me.’ The firemen left, shaking their heads.

The dam broke and the water rushed in. The woman went up to the second floor of her house. Rescuers came with a boat and asked her to come. She said, ‘There is no need, Allah will save me.’ So they left.

The water rose. The woman went onto the roof. A helicopter came to save her but she refused, saying, ‘Allah will save me.’

The woman drowned and went to heaven, and asked Allah, ‘Why didn’t you save me?’ He said, ‘I sent you a fire truck, a boat and a helicopter…’”

Murid chuckled but waved his hand in dismissal. “That’s not this. I’m not waiting for a miracle. Just until I can pay my way, like anyone else.”

Abu Ali sighed heavily. “Then I have another request. And it is not another strategy to convince you.” He jabbed Murid in the chest heavily with one finger, rocking him on his heels. “Go for me.”

“Explain.”

“I can never go to Hajj, brother. My family warred against Aal-As-Saud, and lost. Furthermore, one of my uncles is active in the Saudi democracy movement. If I ever set foot in my homeland I would be arrested and executed. So I will pay you to go to Hajj, and you dedicate it to me. I will receive the reward, not you. But here’s the thing. Aside from the completion of the required rituals, your time is yours. When you stand on Arafah, make dua’ for me and for yourself as well. When you stand beside the grave of Ar-Rasool, sal-Allahu alayhi wa sallam, convey salam to him from me and from yourself as well. This is neither sadaqah nor a loan. It is a gift you would grant me.”

Murid thought about this. A smile spread across his face. “It’s a deal. But the thing with Hiba is separate. I make no promises in that regard.”

Abu Ali extended his hand and Murid took it, bracing himself for the crushing of his fingers, but Abu Ali was gentle, and when Murid looked up he saw tears on the man’s cheeks.

Before Murid left Abu Ali reached into his valise and brought out a letter. “This is from Hiba. I don’t know what it says. Hopefully nothing inappropriate.”

A Song of Hope

He arrived home to find Juliana and Mina playing cards on the floor, while Junaid lay beside them on his stomach, drawing with colored pencils on a pad of white construction paper. His drawings were scribbles really, although sometimes Murid wondered. The colors flowed from one into another, with shapes that vaguely resembled clouds, rivers or trees. The drawings were abstract but compelling. Murid sometimes hung Junaid’s drawings on the walls and gazed at them. They made him feel… some kind of way. Hopeful, perhaps.

Mina ran to him, throwing her arms around his waist, while Junaid continued drawing, not even looking up. But did his ears move? Did his head turn imperceptibly?

Mina pulled away. “What happened?”

“What do you mean?”

“You seem discombobulated.”

“Alhamdulillah. All is well.”

Later, when Juliana was gone, Murid and Mina prayed together as Junaid lay on his back next to them, making shapes with his fingers. When they were done, Junaid climbed into Murid’s lap and put his arms around him. The fourteen year old boy was a bit large for that, but Murid shifted positions and made it work. Junaid nuzzled his nose against his father’s cheek. The boy smelled of applesauce. At that moment, Murid felt completely happy and at peace. Junaid had that ability. His embraces were so sincere and pure, that being loved by him was like lying in warm sunshine in a mountain meadow, breathing air as sweet as sugar, and listening to the birds sing songs of renewal and hope.

“Do you ever make duaa’ for Dana?” Mina asked, referring to her mother by name as always.

“Never.” It probably wasn’t what Mina wanted to hear, but it was the truth. “Do you?”

“Always. Do you think she is dead?”

“I don’t know.”

“But what does your heart say?”

“What does your heart say?”

“Answering a question with a question is called rorical affirmation.”

“You mean rhetorical affirmation? I didn’t know that.”

After a few minutes of silence, Mina said, “My heart doesn’t know what to think. Sometimes it is sad.”

Murid reached out and pulled the girl to him, and the three of them sat like that, in a huddle, as the clock ticked on the mantle. The wind gusted outside, and somewhere down the block a dog began to howl.

The Letter

The children were asleep. Murid sat on the sofa and clicked through the channels to the football match. Settling in and crossing his arms, he felt something in his pocket. Hiba’s letter. He’d forgotten about it. Opening it, he found a single sheet of light blue paper that smelled like lavender. On it was a short paragraph followed by a poem:

Dear Murid, as-salamu alaykum wa rahmatullah.

I’ve often seen you at the masjid. I’ve noticed you, and especially how kind you are with your children. Mina is feisty, and Junaid is adorable, and you are their steadfast angel, placed on this earth to take care of them. I can only imagine how difficult it must be to do the job alone. There must be times when you yearn and pray for a helper, or even better a partner.

Time stopped, and Murid forgot to breathe. It was as if this young woman had opened a window into his head and peered inside to read his thoughts. As if she had a map of his heart, and had only to look at it to call out the names of his hopes and prayers. He read on:

I am not someone anyone would notice. I’m plain and quiet. But perhaps, if Allah wills it, and if you could look past my plainness and see the vibrant soul beneath, I could be the partner you need. Who knows? Stranger things have happened beneath the sun.

I took a poetry class in college, mostly to fill the English requirement, but something about it snagged my soul. Ever since then I have found poetry to be a way to organize and distill the chaotic emotions that swirl within me. I wrote this one for you:

I envy the road you walk on
because it travels with you.
The road feels the blisters on your feet,
catches the tears you weep,
is stained by your blood as it spills,
sees you collapse then rise
by fierce and joyous will.

The road witnessed
when you were betrayed and burned.
It followed as you turned,
rose as you rose,
knows only what you know
yet is with you every footfall.
Like a beating heart,
the road feels it all.

I am jealous of the road
when it hears your song
like the dove at dawn.
I envy the road
that you crouch upon
in the fading light
not knowing if you can fight
another day.

The road forgives,
welcomes again,
witnesses victories and pains,
sees you embrace enemies
and exile friends
yet never in judgment weighs.

The road falls like a stone
and rises like a wave
and is with you all your days.

Darkness Into Light

Murid’s face was hot with shock. No one had ever said such things to him. Certainly not Dana, his vanished wife, who had been intelligent and attractive, but very focused on her own dreams. She had not been especially loving, and Murid had often felt lonely within the marriage, which is the worst kind of loneliness.

Looking at this letter, reading it over again, he didn’t know what to think. Was this for real? Did Hiba truly feel such passion for him? And such fondness for his kids? It seemed too good to be true. At the same time it was a little creepy. How long had she been watching him? It didn’t seem normal, and it frightened him a little. What did she mean about him being betrayed and burned? Was she referring to Dana abandoning him? Murid was a private person and almost never spoke about his past. It was disturbing to have someone he barely knew writing about his life in such an intimate way.

On the other hand, it seemed that Hiba somehow understood him deeply. Maybe more deeply than anyone ever had. Her poem saw as deeply into him as an electron microscope. While it might be creepy, being understood so profoundly was incredibly validating.

He put the letter in the envelope. He didn’t have time for this right now. Tomorrow was Junaid’s party. These get-togethers with his family never went well. After that Murid would plan his trip to Hajj, inshaAllah. SubhanAllah. It was amazing how Allah opened doors in what appeared to be a solid wall. How Allah changed darkness into light. It was true that Allah had power over all things, Murid saw that.

Next: Part 4 – The Birthday Party

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