Welcome to day three! Now that we’re publishing the semifinalists, please do check out each day’s poems and cast your vote.
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1) We’re going to publish four shortlisted poems a day, for five days.
2) Each day, you, the public, vote for the poem that you like best out of the four published.
3) The poems with the most votes from each day will go on to the final round, where a second poll will decide the winner and runners up.
Simple, eh?
As beautiful as the poems all are, and we are indeed experiencing the Holy month of Ramadan, the spirit of the competition can be pretty overwhelming. That’s why here’s a simple reminder to keep it clean, and wholesome, healthy competitiveness that adds to the fun but does not hurt anyone in anyway.
Without further ado, here’s the third group of semifinalists for your pleasurable reading.
I wonder how you welcome Ramadan
Do you wait for it with open arms?
And when it comes, give it a welcome warm?
Or do you grumble and believe that harm
Is hunger to health or is thirst too hard?
And it fascinates me how you treat your fast
Do you wake up grumbling before dawn?
To eat a morsel, on your face a frown?
And then do you pray, with a sleepy brain
Your morning prayer, before the time is gone?
And do you sleep, through out the day?
Or does your fast get in your way
When you are told to do some work
Other than chatting, or gossiping, or play?
Does your fast stop when you lie?
Or does the fast pass as every normal day?
In entertainment, untruths and useless bray?
Is that how you treat Ramadan?
Or when fast is broken, do you eat your feed?
Without caring about those in need?
Is a day’s hunger not sufficient to make you heed
Or your heart yearns not towards a good deed?
Or does it not pain you, your every bad deed?
Is not Ramadan, enough to take lead?
Of your misguided selfish deeds?
Is that how you treat Ramadan?
And in the mosque, at the time of night
When is recited, the book of light
Do you spend the time in flight?
From your Lord and in useless fights?
Does not your conscience bite?
Your heart or is it too much still
To make you stir for the path which is right
Is that how you treat Ramadan?
Beware the month of forgiveness and mercy
Do you not take from the hell fright?
Or do you not wish to be pure and white
To rush towards your Lord and the guiding light?
Return before you reach the height
When time is over and your insight
Becomes frightfully clear and bright
O Man waste not your Ramadan
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Iftar Table Musings By: Sohaib Baig
The medjool dates are ready, so is my glass of water
I sit with my watch
a million thoughts slide by
as quietly as the distant, setting sun
the day’s struggles
the thirst
the hunger
the tedious incomplete work
the forthcoming night
my eyes close, but my mind stays awake
my stomach growls, counting the time
as if it can be counted
What is time, but a hideous distraction
An anchor pulling us back to this gargantuan world,
cutting it into small, edible bits
but there really is no time – only timelessness
for this is not really a world – only an evanescing phase
our souls are on an eternal journey,
created from long before, headed for something much greater
we have to weave our way
maneuver past this world’s tight fist
stamp out our cold, befuddled shivers
open our eyes for the first time, truly
then bask in the tranquil openness, and warmness
inside rivers with no banks and valleys with no peaks
under a sun with endless streams of light
and gaze at our Lord
freely, peacefully, unendingly
and all alone.
we all have been marauding around
like uninvited guests, though we were invited
eating the forbidden fruit, hiding behind leaves
few, if ever, see through the deftly-woven branches
and notice the rays of light and Mercy
streaming, encompassing our nomadic worlds
giving life to our automated lives
He offers us forgiveness
all these Ramadans, all these Prayers
all this Qur’an, all these Qiyams
but we deftly press the snooze button
how far we are from Him,
yet how close He is to us.
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Thank you to the “Iftaar Table Musings” and “Shawwal” poets for being unique. I voted for the former because it had the most individual concept through it from beginning to end. However the latter is still a superb job for not having to incessantly talk about Ramadan and instead introduced the new concept of how Ramadan is not about Ramadan – it’s about what comes after. Thank you to both. May Allah bless you all, ameen.
Sohaib’s and Sayf’s poems should be first and second place in this entire contest (all five days). It would be sad if one of these two don’t advance into the finals.
Don’t make dua for your friend to win. Make dua for the best poem to win.
Thanks everyone, I’m glad you guys enjoyed reading my newbie poem – it was a lot of fun to write!
Careful with calling people food, it’s Ramadan someone might get eaten. =O}
Mashallah !Muneeb ur poem has a beautiful choice of words and i really like your poem the best though i must appreciate other lil contestants who bothered to take out their precious time for such a healthy competition and all have done well .
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Amad
August 31, 2010 at 1:31 AM
Wow Sayf, that was incredible.
For me it was a tough choice between Sohaib’s and Sayf’s, not that the other two were any less.
But I will say that whoever wins this day, may be in the front seat :) Just my personal observation, no rigging implicated :) This isn’t Egypt.
Son of Adam
August 31, 2010 at 1:56 AM
Mashallah. Definitely Sohaib’s Poem.
Truly purposeful with beauty radiating through words.
Allah blesses those whom He loves.
Daughter of Hawwa
August 31, 2010 at 2:07 AM
Thank you to the “Iftaar Table Musings” and “Shawwal” poets for being unique. I voted for the former because it had the most individual concept through it from beginning to end. However the latter is still a superb job for not having to incessantly talk about Ramadan and instead introduced the new concept of how Ramadan is not about Ramadan – it’s about what comes after. Thank you to both. May Allah bless you all, ameen.
Raakin Hossain
August 31, 2010 at 2:50 AM
None other than Sohaib’s poem! Insightful and deep. A typical work from a Baig. =P Masha-Allah!
I love how he ties it up with the last two lines, leaving a good sense of guilt in your heart.
abez
August 31, 2010 at 4:18 AM
This one is a really, really hard decision. SubhanAllah!
Maaz
August 31, 2010 at 4:41 AM
Shawwal
By: Sabour B. (Sayf)… MashaAllah… the best so far.
Z
August 31, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Hardest decision yet.
Ameera Khan
August 31, 2010 at 7:31 AM
My feelings exactly! :)
Maryam
August 31, 2010 at 4:45 PM
ma shaa Allah i love shawal poem i felt it was very creative n twisty :)
Sohaib
September 1, 2010 at 3:50 AM
I liked Muneeb’s poem as it rhymes beautifully
diluted
September 4, 2010 at 5:06 AM
The only poem that has rythem along with thought full with essences of Ramazan.
Rest of the Poems are inner thoughts put out in lines. (AZAD SHAIREE)
Great work….
Muneeb you have my vote…..
hasan kamal
September 1, 2010 at 12:37 PM
i like muneebs poem the most ….. it awesom.. like no others in this world
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Sohaib
September 1, 2010 at 11:44 PM
I like the poem of my brother
Akbar
September 2, 2010 at 2:28 AM
who ever does not vote for Safs poem is a doughnut ……. a halal one
Nas
September 2, 2010 at 3:41 PM
Consider me a donut.
Daughter of Hawwa
September 2, 2010 at 11:23 PM
Sohaib’s and Sayf’s poems should be first and second place in this entire contest (all five days). It would be sad if one of these two don’t advance into the finals.
Don’t make dua for your friend to win. Make dua for the best poem to win.
Wish for your brother what you wish for yourself.
brother
September 2, 2010 at 3:52 PM
Hey muneeb ur already winning why u need me to vote for you? calm down bro ;)
Broski
September 2, 2010 at 4:43 PM
WOoooo sabour!! i believe in u!! u can do it!! woooooooo!!
Sayf
September 3, 2010 at 12:32 AM
Thanks everyone, I’m glad you guys enjoyed reading my newbie poem – it was a lot of fun to write!
Careful with calling people food, it’s Ramadan someone might get eaten. =O}
Umar Farooq
September 3, 2010 at 12:46 AM
‘ Welcum ramadan ‘ ws nyc nd ‘ Shawwal ‘ ws also gud..!!!!!!
Arshi
September 3, 2010 at 1:09 AM
Mashallah !Muneeb ur poem has a beautiful choice of words and i really like your poem the best though i must appreciate other lil contestants who bothered to take out their precious time for such a healthy competition and all have done well .
ismaeel shariq
September 3, 2010 at 4:45 AM
bro muneeb u dont really need votes…do u?????u can jst win without them……gd luck for the finals
Umar Farooq
September 3, 2010 at 11:51 AM
Who r u saying gud luck 2,…:-) dis guy wud not b able 2 see ur response coz ryt now he iz sittin in aetakaf…!!!!! :-)
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Ayesha A.
September 3, 2010 at 4:40 PM
i like sohaib’s poem..iftar musing..keep up the good work!!!
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